2.5?


It was just an ok read for me.

I didn't care much for the Mc's
It was all fast insta-lust/love and nasty sex talk in Luke's case
(I'm not a fan off dick reaching uterus comments in books I don't find it appealing it sounds rather uncomfortable to me...)
and wet panties for Delia #ugh (Luke didn't even say or do something to require that but hey who am i.. )
She didn't even see his 12 inches yet!
Yup Luke's got it all and is full of himself #ugh

Anyhow my favorite Sc's are Chris he just too Cute&Sweet and Sheila .

The story was ok nothing wrong with it persé but I have alot of pet peeves and this book has them so .

Also it needs a bit of editing ..,


Charlene Silvernail808 4

Delia, Chris and Luke: a real family

Good book, especially the ending. However chapter 26 through 30 is confusing. Did Luke lose his memory and not recall what he did and said in that chapter for Delia to leave in chapter 27. Chapter 28 through 30 are confusing because it makes you think Delia was dreaming the whole situation. And what happened to Chris’s father? It would have been more interesting if he finally wanted to see his son OR that Delia allows Luke to adopt Chris and get his father totally out of the picture. No real drama.
The wedding was real and for real because Luke realized that he loves Delia and Chris. And in the end Delia is pregnant. denise wise78 3

I d it

He was a bit of an asshat in the beginning...and she was acting questionable....lol.. But overall i enjoyed the book. Everybody got their personalities together and I enjoyed the read. Candice M Johnson214 3

Good story poorly written.

I rarely do bad , but I spent as much time trying to piece together sentence fragments as I did deciphering run ons. This was grammatical chaos. Lynn487 3

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