Good story line but needs reviewing

This book has great potential. I really did enjoy it. But it would not be a good and accurate review if I said it was perfect.
Several sentences were repeated throughout. Restructuring the sentence would have made several make more sense in the context they were being used. The breaking up of a character’s spoken dialogue into paragraphs was confusing. Quotations were placed in areas where a dialog was not taking place.
All in all, I would recommend reading this book; but be aware it does need some editing. 1 Emily El3

Amazing

Such a good story broke my heart a few rimes and left me with questions can't wait to read book 2 Vanessa Brannon17

Pager turnner!

Really good book. Keeps you on the edge of your seat.Drive you a little mad because of the lack of communication.But that's what makes it so intense. KayCeeReads1,085

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