compelling story and writing

I really d the book. Interesting storyline and interesting way of using the dream flashbacks to grow the character.
Some extra proofreading should be done as there were a lot of writing errors (line of site, …) but it wasn’t disruptive.
Looking forward to the second book.1 David P. Duffy461 23

Another “The Ember Wars” Prequel

“Battleborn (TheWeapon 1)” authored by Richard Fox, is an unattributed as a prequel to his mostly entertaining & successful “The Ember Wars” series and franchise.

The unattributed as a prequel following an attributed prequel just weeks ago is ladened with flaws, starting fails in proofreading from beginning to end, Loss of Continuity, disparaging & denigrating Christianity’s God, by using Him repeatedly as a swear or curse, and the ‘flesh’ on the skeleton of this “The Ember Wars” backstory prequel’s storyline and plot lines is derived from books and movies, such as “The Dirty Dozen,” “Jurassic Park,” “Universal Soldier” and “Soldier” to name a few.

It’s a mess and a shameful effort by the author.

Read fully via KU with Notes/Highlights on Goodreads. Gabriel162

Stunning dake at the inside of the mind

Really stunning take. It made me wonder both at the mental strenght warriors and other men have to fight off the temptation, to stay true and nobel. Or to fall and become that monster we all fear of becoming.
Watching our hero struggle with the real world and with his mind was gripping.
And lets not forget those little reveals in between. Followers of Richard Fox will probable guess halfway through. LeRoy H. Davis Jr.3

interesting read

d the book, would have been more enjoyable without the vulgar language. I am a Richard Fox fan but this book seemed to have more vulgar language than necessary. Shane277

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