My second grade nephew could have done better then this.

The grammar is atrocious and I almost didn't finish reading it because, it was that bad. The storyline itself is all over the place, you didn't know what to write so you took tidbits of inspiration from everywhere and threw it on a page. I feel this isn't the original story and was just some heavily edited mod podge version of what the original was. There are a lot of plot holes and it feels back in high school when you had to do a group project and no one talked to each other while doing it and the day before the project was due everyone threw their parts onto it and because of that one section is about red pandas breeding in the wild, while another one is directions on how to make Grandma's pecan pie. It makes no sense, but you didn't care as long as you turned it in. 2 s Teresa Lovin350 1 follower

Excellent

I really enjoyed this book and I am ready for book two. This author has a way of keeping you reading when you need to go to bed. Enjoy1 Ranee Mcbride1 review

thrilling

I was hooked from the beginning and can’t wait to read the other books. Please keep up the good work 1 Vera Burton71

Mated and Rejected

I loved this book. I can't wait to read the next book in this series. I loved how the author wrote it and when I read it the characters seem to to come to life. It had everything I love in a book action, romance, and comedy.1 Grace Warren4

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