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SPOILERS IN THIS REVIEW... The storyline in this series seems to pick up and drop off whenever the author feels remembering. There are parts that seem on point but then when it switches to the other character's POV, the time line is completely different- what has passed as months in Olivia's pregnancy is only a couple of weeks for Reese? Then there's the other parts that really just don't make sense (and yes, I know this is a story but still) Reese hides Olivia with armed security but then leaves his daughter at his Grandmother's house without protection? The PI looking into all of this never figures out the story with Holly and the other kid? Or Holly's sister and parents who died? Then there's Reese who never seems to travel during the hockey season in the first book- if you know hockey, you know they play several games a week home and away. Olivia's mom has MS in the first book and suffers several falls but in the second book, her MS isn't brought up anymore. I could go on but I'll stop and say this series could have used a few more test reads and edits before publishing. 3 s1 comment Terri51

This book is AWFUL! The first book in the series, Blue Line Lust, was great with a marvelous slow burn leading up to a fun, steamy love story. This sequel, however, falls apart with a totally bizarre and out of left field storyline that made my head hurt. Was not expecting it. And it was about 200 pages too long. There were a lot of typos too. I DNF it with about 80 pages left, skimming those last pages so I could see how it ends. I’d give it a half star if I could. Do not recommend!started-but-didn-t-finish3 s Erin Robertson32

the ending of this book ruined the whole thing. So rushed and then it just ends? there is no resolution, we know nothing about what happens next. Also not once did anyone report anything to the cops which is absolutely crazy. yeah sure they spoke to a cop but they didn’t make a single police report, call 911 when they were legit kidnapped? dumb.dumb.dumb. no lawyer in their right mind is telling you to NOT report to the cops, that’s how you nail a conviction.

This author tends to write very good first books and okay second ones.Also the editing? terrible. i made a note of one of the mistakes i found but seriously there were more but im not rereading to highlight. 2 s Alex75 1 follower

Olivia & Reese: Part two of the Dallas Bulls Hockey duet. I love reading Mariah Wolff’s books! They do not disappoint. Great characters and plot. Starts off on such a high and plummets. I am obsessed with these hockey duets & I hope there will be more in the future!.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.1 T Hill1 review

I don’t negative and I don’t leaving them but this book compared to the first just makes mad.
This book shouldn’t exist as is. It contradicts all of the first book. There’s no way he was in Vegas and married without the paps knowing about. Everything he does with Violet and Olivia revolves around the paps finding out and exposing him. Then all of a sudden he’s been married for a year and not a soul knew about it… That’s my first complaint. My second is just all of Olivia throughout the book is frustrating. Third is Violet almost doesn’t exist in this book. They rarely have her yet she’s the center of their world. And lastly this one was the worst part of all. The book went from lighthearted with a crazed fan to a very dark book and then basically ends. The whole hospital scene was just confusing and illogical. If you’re going to make such a dark scene you have to do it justice and not just put a bandaid on it. Was it even necessary to go so dark? No, not at all and I love dark. This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.Show full review Erin OBrien1,092 4

What a great follow-up to Blue Line Lust, the first book in this duet!
We left off on a huge bomb being dropped right in Reese and Olivia’s laps. It doesn’t get any better from there. Having a huge hole ripped in their happy little bubble, Olivia and Reese struggle to find the truth in all the lies dropped in their laps.
Every time they think things are starting to go their way, something else will blow up.
I just couldn’t put this down. It was nerve-wracking and heartbreaking all at once. Fear not! There may be happiness on the horizon.
5 stars!!!.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review. Grinning Cat1,306 55

This book has the same characters as the previous book in the duet, but that’s about all of the resemblance. The story took a sharp 90 degree angle and got really strange. In storyline, this book jumped the shark and kept getting over the top crazier. The previous book was somewhat realistic. This one hasn’t an acquaintance with reality. It kept getting more and more ridiculous. It’s too bad because the previous book had promise that wasn’t carried through in this one. Not recommended.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.hated-it reviewed2 s2 comments Brandy Rice1,264 16

The conclusion to this duet is not as good as the first book. The ending seems really rushed and there are some unanswered questions. Olivia and Reese go through a lot in this book. There are a lot of twists and turns in this book, but some parts of the story were just.a little too over the top. Overall this was just an ok read for me.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.2024x arc-24 booksprout ...more JM G514 2

I enjoyed reading the second book in the Dallas Bulls Hockey series. Olivia and Reese are perfect for each other. Once I started reading it, I wanted to keep reading to find out what was going to happen. I would recommend reading this series. I hope you enjoy it as much as I did.

I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.1 YAZ3885212

The story continues and you’ll enjoy this roller coaster. Reese and Olivia can’t catch a break every time they’re happy someone shatters it. They have to endure so much and you’re going to cry with them. The support of family and friends was awesome. Holly should have suffered more but they get a nice HEA.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review. Cecy 51

It was such an emotional ride. I'm so happy that Olivia and Reese got their happy ending. With everything happening, I was rooting for them the entire time. Overall, it was such an amazing read and I was hooked throughout the whole book.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.arcs hockey Elesha's book fun gossip901 2

Reese and Olivia's story jump straight back in no holding back as there world it tipped on its head. Causing a chain reaction of drama, emotions and outcomes. This was a captivating storyline and brilliant characters.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review. Wendy Livingstone17.4k 212

This is the second part of the duet, and Reese and Olivia’s journey continues.
This is a good story which has family, friendships, emotions, drama, challenges, secrets, truths, lies, heartbreak, and love, which leads to an enjoyable page turner.
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Jen194 7

Ridiculous

I’m going to be careful of what I say because my review of the first book didn’t get posted because I said the word j e r k but this book was seriously ridiculous and not in a good way. I should have DNF’d it but I wanted to find out what happened. Now I really wished I hadn’t bothered… Autumn LaRock12

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The first book in this duet was good. The second was kind of obnoxious. At least the first line 40%. Then it did get better but Olivia automatically believing the marriage thing without so much as a real conversation then telling her friends and family that he lied to her was a bit over the top. Jeanne Richardson9,479 115

This is the second book I've read written by Mariah Wolfe; I can’t wait to read more of her books.

This is the second book in the Dallas Bulls Hockey Duet; the story continues from the previous book and needs to be read in order. Kellie May8

What a twist in the second book of this duet. Stalker, crazy fan, gun fight and an epic love trying to survive it all. Keeps you guessing till the big reveal! Definitely worth the read.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review. Leah Jackson2

Well this kinda sucks…

First book was great! this one ruined it all.. Al that drama just to have everything change at the end?? and you don’t even get to see the happy ending without clicking a link? Sorry but boo. Cassaundra5

Couldn’t put it down!

This one had a great story line. In the first book I seriously was hating on Reese and then he grew on me. The second I started hating on Olivia… After all was said and done I ended up loving them! KELLEY1 review

So far fetched

Book 1 was great, sports and romance. The second book was just awful. Wanted to quit reading it many times but I forced myself to finish. Hours of my life I will never get back. Stacie Hegenauer827 2

WOW! That ending is a beast! This is part 2 of a duet about the love between Olivia and Reese. This book has all the makings of a great novel…stalking, surprises, baby-mama drama, friend drama…and the author pieces it all together seamlessly! Even if you aren’t a hockey fan or sports romance fan this book will appeal to most contemporary romance fans and I highly recommend it! Emma Monroe 5

couldn’t put it down!!

Such an amazing book! Honestly had me in the edge of my seat till the very end! Couldn’t put it down!! Jodi Sue117 1 follower

What a crap ending

Wow... Firstly, there needed to be trigger warninga. Secondly, I don't think I've read a mire abrupt unresolved ending ever. Very disappointing. Emily pistel55

the first one was so good & this one I just didn’t really enjoy. I dnfed it & went to the last chapter to see & good thing I dnfed bc the ending was not my cup of tea either Cassandra64

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