Obviously Loved It

At first I thought it was going too fast and it was. But then I got to the end and realized that I loved the sex, and loved the couple, while hating the bull.

But most of all I loved that as quickly as the story, and the three way relationship, was developing, the story was there. It really was a story. Short maybe yes, but the author was doing more than just write the sex scenes interspersed with a couple of paragraphs to transition to the next sex scene. There were feelings presented.

I still wasn’t fully happy with the way the story was unfolding, but that was a lie. The story was progressing just it should have. It was just that I was much more involved with the characters than I thought I should be in such a short period of time.

It turns out that I loved the story because it grabbed me and made me care about what was to happen. Kirklyn Henry127 4

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