Good concept

I really the thought process behind this story and I enjoyed the authors writing style.
I did have some troubles. I found only one of the guys had a distinctive personality, all the others kind of blended in together so I got lost who's pov I was reading because they all sounded similar.
I also think some content or development editing would really help. I know the cost of this is crazy, so I still want to support the author by reading more so she will be able to do this.
I said, I love her writing style and her idea behind it. I hope to keep supporting her and see how her other books are. Janice Wright48

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