Course AND Unrefined!!!

This author seriously assumed that the use of such nasty language and behavior turned into love and making love. It. Did. Not! The characters had not even come close to knowing even a little bit about each other to be talking about a deep love. It was irritating every time the story turned in to that direction, because it was just plain fake. I will not be reading this author's books again! Constance67

Indulge

This book would have been better for me if it had not been riddled with unnecessary big words. The grammatical errors and misspellings gave way to the saying “big words = small minds.” However the plot was taken through a quick timeframe the luster was not lost on the erotic portions. There were a great deal of corny erotic scenes. I still give this book a 4 star rating. Because I enjoys the self awareness that ensued of both the heroine and the hero. Beast87

if I could give this a zero

The story line was great but there were so many issues with this book. The formatting was off and not consistent throughout. The tone that the FMC and MMC used weren’t consistent. Plus at times they had the same voice. It almost sounded they were talking in 3rd person but was changed to first person without all the corrections being done. Also there were too many holes in this story. Andrea Moses4

In desperate need of a good editor

Oh my God! The flow of words was horrible. Nothing in this book made sense. The main female character was flakey and the dialogue was stilted and unbelievable. I'm not sure how this book received the stars that it did, but do not waste your money. Angie103 3

So bad - DNF

All this book is about is Desiree and her leaky genitals and hard nipples. I know more about that and Blades huge bulge than what the characters actually look . This book was very cringy so I couldn't finish it. Deb Cochran247

Loved it!

I can't say enough about Blade and Desiree's love story! Blade is super alpha and Desiree is the perfect woman for him! Her real personality came out under Blade's tutelage! I loved he whole book including the ending! Sandra Chambers249 1 follower

Ruthless Billionaire

Felt the attempts on his life really needed a deeper storyline for Desiree to take a bullet. I felt that they should have given us more details. Loved the HEA with the two kids & possibly baby 3! lakiesha brissett556 1 follower

damn sexy

This book ooses sex and erotic. The start of the book is a great way to catch your readers. Attention. I love the detail description of each character. Jacqueline Johnson771 5

I your book

I d this book because it was an Alpha male book Blade was exciting and Desiree was very good to die could have been a little bit tuffer. Khristina181 19

Needs an editor

I can appreciate the story but it is a lot of telling not showing and there needs to be a fair amount of editing for this. A lot of editing. A393 1 follower

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