The story crams in as many cliches as is physically possible, and to be honest it seems a total ripoff of Eragon, which itself wasn't particularly original. To make things worse, it's not even well written, reading more a plot outline than an actual novel.
All in all it's just not worth the effort, I wouldn't have bothered finishing it except that it's incredibly short.8 s José Baena CastelAuthor 2 books97

3,5/54 s k.wing710 26

Really strong start to the series, just wish there was a bit more action, and all the storytelling wasn't done through the narrator. I am a little biased because I wrote a book with similar elements, but I think Kristian incorporates a lot of interesting characters and character motivations. I'm excited to listen to the next!4 s DavidAuthor 102 books91

An engaging quest fantasy. A young man discovers the abandoned stone that should link a dragon to its rider in a kingdom where the emperor has vowed to destroy dragons and their riders. My one criticism is that it felt the world and the peoples that populated it were pulled from a D&D rule book, right down to halflings, elves, and dwarfs. Despite that, I found the characters that inhabited the world to be engaging and I thought the ending was interesting. I felt Adam Chase's narration of the audio version helped elevate and enliven the story.3 s Susan1,743 38

I was hooked on this book from the beginning. It starts with a dark scene – the Emperor’s men have been out searching and destroying dragon nests and they have just found one. While not overly graphic, the point comes across loud and clear with the killing of newly hatched dragons. I definitely my fantasy to have a little bit of a darker side, a more serious side, as this shows there are real consequences for the characters to consider. Then we moved to Elias and his grandma. She was a strong, guiding force in his life and such an integral character before Elias set off on his adventure. Through her, we have just enough background to be very curious about many things: her own past, Elias’s parents, dragon riders and dragons in general, etc. I definitely wanted more and the author delivered.

Pretty soon, Elias comes across the dwarf Thorin (and I think Thorin is actually a half-breed dwarf-halfling, but I could have that wrong). And yes, is Thorin a nod to TolkienÂ’s work? Thorin and Elias become quick friends, mostly because Thorin has recently fallen out of a tree and needs some healing and Elias obliges. They adventure off together, dodging the EmperorÂ’s men and necromancers, meeting more dwarves, ever heading for safety. The necromancer we meet was freaky scarey and the voice the narrator gave her was quite fitting and a little frightening.

The adventure scenes are speckled with scenes of another kingdom – the last hold out from Vosper’s tyrannical reign. Dragons, their riders, and magic users are welcomed and safe there (or at least not actively hunted by the government). We meet some of the dragon riders, the dragons, and the king. There is an interesting scene involving star fruit (a personal favorite of mine). And in the second half of the book we meet a dragon and her rider who were once imprisoned and tortured by Vosper and his minions. Wow! I don’t know if they are the good guys, good guys gone a little insane, or potentially a chaotic bad element off on their own. I am fascinated by these two and really, really look forward to learning more about them in the next installment.

This was a great start to a fantasy series. While suitable for most (if not all) audiences, it has enough gravity to strongly appeal to most adult readers. The characters have depth and history, the world building is just enough to give scope and interest without bogging down the story. The narration was excellent.

Narration: Here is where I gush about the narration of Adam Chase. I loved his various accents for the different peoples of this book, especially ThorinÂ’s voice and that creepy voice of the necromancer. His female voices were also done quite well, especially for EliasÂ’s granma.4review audiobook dragons ...more2 s Amit Gupta51 1 follower

The author Kristian Alva claims to be born in a family of writers & I wonder if this is the best she can do. Anyone who knows the story of Eragon series & Lord of the Rings would instantly recognize that those two stories have been heavily lifted from to make this "story"!! Its not even as interesting as the other two, atleast not in this part. The least she could've done is to just take the theme & build her own story instead of taking whole scenes & changing them slightly!! WTF!2 s Dave NeuendorfAuthor 2 books21

This is a typical coming of age wizard fantasy. The writing was decent, if a little amateurish. That isn't a problem for the expected YA audience. There is magic, though as far as I can tell there's no "system" of magic. And of course, dragons and their riders play a major (good guy) role in the story.

The best testimony I can give about the appeal of the book is that this is my second reading of the trilogy.dragon-fantasy fantasy ya-fantasy2 s Ali216 8

It's lucky to have 3 stars! That was mostly for the twist with Elias' mother which I didn't see coming. I guessed his father almost immediately.

It was good, it kept me reading. I didn't feel I had to put it down. But it is so similar to CP's Inheritance cycle. kindle-read2 s Karen1,935 46

I love books about dragons. 2 s Pamela209 2

Great story! Elias, the grandson of Carina a healer with extraordinary powers, is now involved in an unexpected adventure. Such a good read. On to the next book The Return of the Dragon Riders.2 s Pauline CreedenAuthor 73 books583

A bit slow in the start, but very adventurous and intriguing afterward. I'm a bit jaded on dragons and fantasy, but this one gives it a new, original twist, and is worth picking up!2 s FranAuthor 47 books132

Dragon Stones
Book One: of the Dragon Stone Saga

Author: Kristian Alva

Dragon hunters have a special link to their apprentices called a mage who are proficient in protection spells and keep them safe. Dragon hungers are fortunate enough to be protected by this powerful masking spell allowing them to enter and get close to dragons. We meet Dirkla a mage who has been protecting the EmperorÂ’s WizardÂ’s for two days and has gone without sleep. The Emperor is a sadistic and cruel man and will stop at nothing to gain more power, kill anyone in his wake that might be more powerful and take what belongs to others and make it his namely in this case the coveted Dragon Stones that lie within the throats of these about to be slain infant dragons. Worried that they were running out of food to feed their young three female dragons leave their cave unguarded thinking it safe to fly away. But, dragons have a special telepathic connection with their young and are able to communicate with them. The stones that grow and develop to about the size of a chicken egg lodges itself within the throat of the dragon remaining there all of its life. The dragons use these stone to focus their power and store their magical energy to communicate with their riders. But, the mother dragons or females had no riders and preferred to raise their young alone. But, what happens is sad and the carnage huge as these men enter the nest of these unprotected dragons and the rest you can imagine. The talons are worth a lot and so are the stones but one greedy hunter would learn the price he paid for not listening to the others but the Emperor Vosper would be the only one to prosper.

Elias Dorgumir is a young boy living with his grandmother who is a mage. A mage has a special gift. Hers is to heal and the gift of sight. Seeing darkness overcoming and looming in her direction she decides to share a family story and secret with her young grandson. Leaving to go and give his young friend an herb to ease her monthly pain you learn more about this young man and the dangers involved in just going on a simple errand. The Emperor is so paranoid that he kills his own family in order to retain all the power he needs over everyone and should he learn of any more powerful mage living in his kingdom death would come with a sharp and swift blow. But, two have escaped him. One man named Mitca would grow stronger and his kingdom of Parthos protected. The other a dark and black place the Island of Death ruled by Balbor. Even the Emperor would not venture there. Those living there are mercenaries and those leaving there are trained assassins.

But, there is much more as our young Elias ventures out to get his grandmother some much-needed mushrooms and he stumbles upon a huge beehive hoping to bring home so coveted honey. Carina, his grandmother is wise and when she discovers what he has brought she is excited but what is revealed within the jar and hidden would change the course of this young boyÂ’s life, as within the jar is an emerald. The emerald did not come from a jeweler but from within the throat of a dragon hunter. The part found belonged to the hunter and the other half would still be inside of the dragon as there is an image carved into the stone of a cameo. The other half would be smooth within the dragon. The stone being undamaged might mean the hunter is still alive but when his grandmother warns him to keep this quiet and return the stone to its rightful place, Elias disobeys and what happens will put him in danger. Going to the market and meeting with a man named Frogar he hopes to bargain with him to purchase the stone for a hefty price. What he gets will surprise the reader as the man claims the stone is cursed and rids himself of Elias. Will he tell anyone as his grandmother warned him that if the Emperor or his men found out they would be in serious trouble or worse?

Enter the characters of Parthos and the residents as the author shares the methods used to rehabilitate and care for dragons. Black are juveniles and onyx the largest dragons and each one growing in size able to handle a rider. Brinsop is a dragon that saved Orshek and Karela and they have become attached to him. Orshek is speaking to his mother telepathically asking for her return but she has to take care of the castle. But, the two young dragons are impatient and await their motherÂ’s return as we learn that Karela is fragile and her brother overprotective and both totally spoiled. But, when King Mitca informs everyone about the emerald dragon stone and its possible origin much discussion ensues someone has to leave the safety of Parthos and learn more. Finding the mage and bringing back the stone would be the start as Sela leads the discussion of those present and the reader learns that a rider named Chua was the owner of the stone and his dragon Starclaw lost or dead. But, was he really a traitor as some say? Which one is either might be alive? LetÂ’s bring this back to Elias and find out what happens next.

The author captures the readerÂ’s attention from the first page as she begins with the horrors that befell the poor dragons, the secrets that Elias learns from his grandmother and the fate of the dragons that are safe and being cared for. The story is intricate yet not complicated for young readerÂ’s to understand and the vivid descriptions help the reader visualize the characters and the scenes.

Elias is not longer save as soldiers find their way to his front door placing him in grave danger and forcing him to seek refuge before the EmperorÂ’s wrath and violence comes down on him. Hoping to make it to the safety of the dwarf caverns he will encounter many obstacles on the way. But, can he save the dragons that are still alive and will he come to the aid of the dragon race? But, when the soldiers come to the door his grandmother does something that would prevent him from being caught, deal with the soldiers but at what cost? As Elias runs toward to Darkmouth Forest he meets a dwarf named Thorin who guides him. With his grandfatherÂ’s cloak and his dagger they enter the forest, Elder Willow and hopefully are protected from harm as Elias recounts what happened and why he disobeyed his grandmother. Guilt ridden and sad he would have to forge ahead.

As they make their journey Elias begins to learn more about his past and what his grandmother wanted him to learn from a note and her journal. Spells that would help him survive and magic that might get him past those trying to find and kill him. The dwarves would protect him and the incantations he would learn would hopefully help him survive but what about what the Emperor has planned to Parthos and Mount Velik where the dwarves live? What about the necromancer that did not see him under the concealment spell but found him later on? Who was this female and why was his life spared? What does King Mitca tell Sela that needs to be done to prepare for the battles ahead and which Dragon Riders and dragons would have to risk their lives to save their race? What happens when Duskeye and Tallin leave to find the Dragon Stone? The answers to these questions and the fate of everyone will not be answered until you read Book Two of the Saga and the final book three.

What does the Emperor really fear and what is the prophesy that will destroy him and take away his power? Power hungry, revengeful and hoping to destroy the dwarves and those that harbor the dragon riders. What will happen next as author Kristian Alva continues the saga and this reviewer cannot wait to find out what happens next. One young boy named Elias who is brave, smart and willing to put his life on the line for others and the memory of his grandmother fresh within his mind and thoughts. One book that teaches loyalty, trust, understanding and hope for the future. What is the fate of the stone?
Fran Lewis: reviewer
LetÂ’s give this one: FIVE GOLDEN STONES

Fran Lewis: author of Faces Behind the Stones, Bad Choices, the Bertha Series, Memories are Precious, Because We Care and Sharp As A Tack of Scrambled Eggs Which Describes Your Brain
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Dragon Stones by Kristian Alva
Defiant Press – July 14,2011
www.kristianalva.com
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Emperor Vosper has this plan to kill all of the dragons. They are driven to the edge of existence, almost forgotten about and only talked about in whispers as a wistful memory.
When Elias Dorgumir finds a dragon stone, he gets more than he bargained for and his nice quiet life is completely shattered. Now he must escape the emperor and find safety with the dwarves.

What can I say? I am so excited about this series! I can’t wait to get the second book to review. It has been my experience that fantasy books; regardless of the target age groups are always either really good or really bad. I don’t think that I have ever read one that was just “okay”. If I have, I don’t remember it. This truly was an unexpected delight. Honestly, the only thing that really bothered me was the fact that the action was set in motion with the cliché kid who doesn’t listen to his grandmother because he wants to help out. It is a little cliché but man, nicely done.
What I loved loved loved about this book was that it didnÂ’t bog you down with the history of the land or the details of world building. You start in a time when great battles have already been fought, the evil emperor is already in charge and the people of the land are simply trying to survive. The history is given in snippets at just the right time and youÂ’re never given more than you need. Elias, what a character with potential! There wasnÂ’t a lot of depth given to him, as far as the role that he will ultimately play in the story but I him. There is clearly more to learn about him and the secrets of his family.
The ending! Oh. My. Goodness. I was at work when I got to the last page, to the last sentence. Talk about a cliffhanger, a sentence that just totally baseball bat slammed to the face hit you. So not fair and I DEFINITELY want more- RIGHT NOW!
There wasnÂ’t a lot heart-pounding action, but there was definite flow. There was definite edge-of-your-seat-canÂ’t-stop-turning-pages attraction with this book. And I definitely canÂ’t wait to get my hands on the next one.

Recommendation: Middle grade/Young adult
Rating: Absolutely fantastic, a book that will definitely be kept and passed around to the youngsters in my life! (And probably even some adults)

This book was given to me, free, in exchange for my honest review.

Really? What are you waiting for, go get this book!!


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1 Michelle Hodge51 7

Mommy BookwormÂ’s Thoughts: I thoroughly enjoyed this book right from the get-go all the way through to the end. Dahlia states below, I donÂ’t really having to wait for the next book to come out, but I guess thatÂ’s the life of getting sucked into a series!! I tend to stay away from many series type books, but I truly enjoyed Dragon Stones and I look forward to the other books in the series! The descriptions of the dragons and characters in the book are very good and believable! My daughters and I read this together on our Nook Color and took turns reading each time. They were able to increase their vocabulary and we had fun reading it. We laughed and cried along the way and were shocked at some of the things revealed in the story. It was a great page-turner, full of dragons, dwarfs, humans, dragon riders, sprites, evil necromancers, close calls, magic and mystery with every chapter!

The information received from the publisher has this classified as Young Adult/Fantasy. However, I believe that children ages 8+ would truly enjoy the story. Daisy is 7 years old and she did sometimes get distracted as we were reading aloud, but she still enjoyed the parts she did listen to and pay attention to along the journey. Teenagers could definitely read the book on their own and enjoy it – if they enjoy dragons and magic!

Dahlia BookwormÂ’s Thoughts (11 years old): I how the book caught my attention right from the Prologue and kept my attention through the whole book. I how the map is in the front of the book so we could look at the map when it mentions different places in the book. I do not that there is a cliffhanger and I have to wait a while before the next book comes out. I how they had troubles in each place they went and still got away. I the dragons and characters in the book. I can read it mostly on my own with a little help with some words and names. I would recommend it to kids of all ages and grown-ups too, especially those who dragon stories.

Daisy BookwormÂ’s Thoughts (7 years old): I how there were dragons in the book. I the adventures they went on. I some of the surprises in the story. I donÂ’t how I have to wait for the next book to find out what happens. I think the names in the book are funny. I got to learn some new words because we took turns reading the book. I would recommend it to other kids too because it is a fun story. 1 Michelle Hodge51 7

I thoroughly enjoyed this book right from the get-go all the way through to the end. Dahlia states below, I donÂ’t really having to wait for the next book to come out, but I guess thatÂ’s the life of getting sucked into a series!! I tend to stay away from many series type books, but I truly enjoyed Dragon Stones and I look forward to the other books in the series! The descriptions of the dragons and characters in the book are very good and believable! My daughters and I read this together on our Nook Color and took turns reading each time. They were able to increase their vocabulary and we had fun reading it. We laughed and cried along the way and were shocked at some of the things revealed in the story. It was a great page-turner, full of dragons, dwarfs, humans, dragon riders, sprites, evil necromancers, close calls, magic and mystery with every chapter!

The information received from the publisher has this classified as Young Adult/Fantasy. However, I believe that children ages 8+ would truly enjoy the story. Daisy is 7 years old and she did sometimes get distracted as we were reading aloud, but she still enjoyed the parts she did listen to and pay attention to along the journey. Teenagers could definitely read the book on their own and enjoy it – if they enjoy dragons and magic!

Dahlia BookwormÂ’s Thoughts: I how the book caught my attention right from the Prologue and kept my attention through the whole book. I how the map is in the front of the book so we could look at the map when it mentions different places in the book. I do not that there is a cliffhanger and I have to wait a while before the next book comes out. I how they had troubles in each place they went and still got away. I the dragons and characters in the book. I can read it mostly on my own with a little help with some words and names. I would recommend it to kids of all ages and grown-ups too, especially those who dragon stories.

Daisy BookwormÂ’s Thoughts: I how there were dragons in the book. I the adventures they went on. I some of the surprises in the story. I donÂ’t how I have to wait for the next book to find out what happens. I think the names in the book are funny. I got to learn some new words because we took turns reading the book. I would recommend it to other kids too because it is a fun story.1 Hollie134 17

I'm tempted to not write a review on this book at all, just as I was tempted to give it one star instead of two, cause I just can't come up with much of anything nice to say. So, I'm just going to relay my perceptions of this story, knowing that there are many people out there that will have a completely different opinion, and that's ok.

My biggest disappointment with this book is how simple the language is. After the first two pages I considered just putting it down and moving on to something else, but decided I needed to see it through and give it a fair shot. I understand this is targeting a YA audience, and that the state of our education system is pretty poor these days, but I think this is closer to a third grade reading level. Much of the exposition is along the lines of "The sky was red. Elias was afraid. He walked up to a big tree." Sure it tells you what is going on, but without any artistry or rich illustration usually found in fantasy. Even in the dialogue, where the author integrated explanation into the discussion, it was stilted and simplistic. Characters constantly stated the obvious, and dialogue between supposed good friends contained such statements as "I am a grain merchant. My wife Freda helps me in my business." This may be a little exaggerated, but portrays the way I perceived this forced and clumsy exposition on the world and the characters.

This book is also very heavily reminiscent of C.P.'s Inheritance Cycle. The circumstances and events are very close. I usually don't mind similar fantasy works, and am not one of those people constantly harping that every one and their uncle is ripping off Tolkien. If the story is good, it doesn't matter to me if it's a lot another work. In this instance though, my personal feeling is that this is just a really dumbed down and poorly written imitation of a much better story. 1 Jill Swanson-Diaz160 56

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I was extremely excited when Defiant Press contacted me to review this series. This type of science fiction and fantasy usually isn't given enough attention in the Young Adult world. I have been itching to read a good saga with adventure and mythical creatures.
Overall I have given this series a solid four star rating and Kristian Alva definitely deserves it.
As an author she has a great, imaginative writing style. Her writing is simplistic yet engaging. Any middle grade or young adult lover of sci fi and fantasy will enjoy reading this series.

Dragon Stones was a definite strong start to the series. All though it was shorter than I would have d, it set great groundwork for the next two books in the series. You are introduced to the inner workings of Durn slowly throughout the novel. The plot easily builds on itself and becomes increasingly more interesting as it progresses. Alva has created some memorable characters. Most importantly is the main character Elias. He is a endearing, brave and unabashed by anything that is thrown his way.
I loved how there are several sides to the story going on at once. It allows you to gain a full understanding of the story without being overloaded with information and details all at the same time. The action is fast paced and full of surprises leading you straight into the second book of the saga.arc-or-review-copy on-the-blog sci-fi ...more1 Stephen Levesque2,349

Sequestered deep in the capital, the tyrannical Emperor Vosper weaves a plan to destroy all the dragons. He succeeds in driving them to the very brink of extinction. Only a handful of dragons and riders remain; living in exile in the desert. When young Elias Dorgumir finds a carved dragon stone in the forest, it brings empire soldiers to his doorstep, and puts Elias on the run with a bounty on his head. With some help from his friends, Elias must escape the emperorÂ’s wrath and try to make it to the safety of the dwarf caverns. Elias holds the key to the salvation of the dragon race. Is Elias strong enough to halt the evil that is spreading across the land?
This truly was an unexpected delight. You start in a time when great battles have already been fought, the evil emperor is already in charge and the people of the land are simply trying to survive. The history is given in snippets at just the right time and youÂ’re never given more than you need. Dragon Stones does a good job of building the base for the two major plots. There are hints on how the 2 plots will mesh but that is left for future volumes. This is definitely it's own world, a true fantasy novel, very creative with it's own rules and mythologies, so there's some that a reader has to learn and grasp, but it's not a bad thing. It helps to transport you into this imaginary world even more. If you pick this up, you will not be disappointed. Great read everyone.1 Laura3,206 345

Held my interest from the very beginning. Characters I want to know more about.
The beginning builds the worlds and different populations.
When the tension is introduced it builds steadily. Danger grows and attacks without advance notice.
The HUGE revelation at the end...I am so happy I have the second book qued up.

Raised by his grandmother after his parents' tragic demise during time of war, Elias does not know his true family history. His grandmother is a healer, mainly with herbs and wild plants. She teaches Elias simple spells that help him survive, but warns him to keep his magic hidden.
Elias loves his grandmother and wants to please her, yet he is still a curious, impetuous young boy. Occasionally he does not make the wisest choices. When he tries to do something special for his grandmother and discovers a dragon stone in the process, he has no idea of its significance.
When word gets out about the stone, no one is safe any more.

Elias is sent on a journey, running and hiding for his life. He meets new friends, who seem to know a great deal more than he does about his grandmother. As he learns and travels we also learn the history and the significance. We also learn about dragons.

I received the trilogy box set to read in return for an unbiased review.
I will begin the second book right away.1 Kristen2,089 148

In Kristian Alva's Dragon Stones, the first installment in the Dragon Stones middle grade fantasy series, this tale would send you on a great adventure with your wildest imagination. For Elias', he lived with his grandmother. But when he discovered an emerald stone in the forest, he had been forewarned about the hidden dangers of it from his grandmother. Though he wished to sell it, it had only brought trouble to their doorstep. When word came about it, his grandmother died with a fire spell, leaving Elias to hide and fend for himself. In a world of dragon riders, who communicate telepathically with their dragon, where magic is performed with elves, mages, and dwarfs, Elias made new friends along the way and discovered the true identity of his parentage, when the evil king Vosper wants him captured. It's up to him to hide for safety and use the magic that came from his grandmother's book of spells. It had lined up well to set up the rest of the series. (I had the pleasure of reading this for Upwork as the author's beta reader/book reviewer to read book one out of the 3-box set of the series, when I have noted some minor grammar issues that can be easily fixed in my feedback report.)2016 fantasy middle-grade1 Jessica 2,267 14.9k

Dragon Stones had me hooked from the first chapter. I love reading books about wizards, magical creatures, and anything else magical so it's no surprise that I enjoyed this book. I d Elias from the moment I met him and how he was so brave and didn't complain about having to runaway with the rare and dangerous Dragon Stone. I also really d the dwarf who's helping him, Thorin. He always knows what to do and his personality is just so likable. This book kind of reminded me of Eragon, with the whole dying Dragon Race and the fight of evil vs. good. I felt Dragon Stones was just the opening book, there wasn't really a whole lot of things going on but it was necessary to build up to the next book. It was never boring, but it was just too short and I wished that it went on a little bit longer. The ending was a great twist and cliffhanger, so I really can't wait for the next book! books-i-own1 Gretchen396 25

This is a fantasy story about a world where the evil emperor is hunting down and killing dragons and their dragon riders. The dragons and their riders have magically powers and are bonded together by stones that each wears or has implanted in their chests. Elias, a 15 year old boy, is living with his grandmother when he finds a dragon stone. Elias, who has some magical powers, is forced to go on the run when the emperor sends soldiers to capture him and the stone. His grandmother dies saving him from the soldiers. This is the first book in a series, and it is a short book. It introduces some important characters, but not a lot happens in the book. The book ends without any really climatic events. It does end with a set of cliffhangers, but I felt the book would have been better if it could have stood alone as a story versus just seeming a prequel to the next book.

I won this copy in one of the Goodreads giveaways.first-reads1 Justyn SimonAuthor 2 books10

The only thing I didn't about this book is that it's short. Elias lives with his grandmother. He finds this stone tries to sell it, some empire soldiers come. Then the grandmother blows up the house which allows him to escape. Elias goes back to the place where he found the stone. He meets a dwarf named Thorin, then finds out his father was a dragon rider. They leave to go to the dwarf capital, on the way they stop at this one town Jutland to get some horses, as they leave that town they get followed by a necromancer (Ra'zac) which then catches up with them. The next town they go to Faerro, they meet a man from which they find out that the king has made an alliance with the orcs (Urgals). At the end of the book, they are still on the way to their destination. While this is happening the rebel king Mitca, has troubles of his own. Also the book tells of this one dragon rider and dragon. What happens to them and who they find.adventure dragon myth1 Annie37

The book started good, the premise was enticing, the characters seemed believable, but then it became worse, until I had to skip paragraphs so I could get to the end. The actions of the characters simply failed to convince me. The main character acted more a spoiled brat and sheltered child, immature to the point of annoying, not someone who worked alongside his grandmother to make ends meet and not a child who had to live in an era of oppression as he did. Naivete has its place, but not in a child that had the life of the main character.
Believe me, when you have no money, the naivete and immaturity goes away very fast.

And excuse me, is it really believable that in 30 days the boy gained roping muscles, an extremely trained body? Not really! It takes years of hard work and exercise. 1 Scott WozniakAuthor 5 books88

This is a tale of the prophesied boy with magic powers from a small village who discovers a dragon stone and is hunted by the evil emperor. It's far from original and many issues are resolved far too easily. There are little pieces that are clearly not thought through (ease of escapes from trouble, using fire to light the way inside a tree, a mentor who too easily appears and finds the boy, etc). And the writing is often redundant: "'I'm glad we didn't run into a necromancer.' Tallin was glad they didn't run into a necromancer because they were powerful foes."

It's not terrible, just simple. It's also pretty short. However, the end of the book offers some nice surprises. If the next book is cheap enough I may read it to see what the author does once the cliche opening is used up. 1 Sheila G504 96

I'm disappointed with this book - so much so that I nearly didn't finish it, but I can't not finish a book.

This is a copycat of Eragon, with a dash of Lord of the Rings on the side. Even the names are similar.

I understand that fantasy is a genre, especially when considering dragons, that has been explored more than most. Certain common themes already tend to exist. But don't take an idea that is unique and known to belong to a specific author, and try to run with it. No. Make up something new, something exciting and unique. It's fantasy--the author has the liberty to do he or she pleases. But this, has just too many similarities to other more prominent books out there.2016-completed-reads dnf-series fantasy ...more1 Sasha141 8

This was another one of the ebooks I have had on my kindle for quite a while and finally decided to read it.
This book is somewhere between 3 stars and 4 stars because I think that there is some great potential. But some of the dialogue was strange. It seemed too formal when it needed to be more conversational. The characters were written well enough, with humans, dwarfs and elves. And don't forget the dragons: think Game of Thrones rather than How To Train Your Dragon). They are brutal, dangerous and rare. I really d how the dragons are characterised by their colours: there are emerald dragons, black onyx dragons and rare white diamond dragons.
1 Zoe's Book14 2

Dragon Stones is a wonderful book with great characters, my favorite character is Sela. It would be really cool to ride a dragon.

In Dragon Stones a young boy named Elias and his grandmother live in a little town it the mountains when Elias is out getting some honeycomb he finds a strange stone. He shows it to his grandmother and she tells him to hide it. Then the imperials come, he must run.

Kristian Alva wrote a wonderful book with lots of imagination. Anybody and everyone will love this book.1 Warren Parad78 4

Was this book written by a 6 year old? I couldn't even get in to the first couple of pages without being lost in the endless grammatical errors and abrupt passage changes. Every sentence seems out of place, and every thought only partly described. The only way I could possibly share what this was is to mention the cliche of that child author in a candy store. Could not even get through chapter one, as the point of the story had been so terrible lost as well as any conceivable understanding of the world.

Dropped.1 Artrain147 8

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