Great potential but needs some editing.

This book has the potential to turn into a great series. Primal Hunter but with an MC that has real emotions, not antisocial, and grows throughout the book. What’s not to . But some of the other said, please check your spelling and grammar. Those repeating words and the ocean of commas really throws me off every few pages. The first book in the series is the most important to hook people. These are the kinds of issues that might stop some people from reading future books in the series. This is 100% worth the authors time to fix.1 2 comments Donald Thibodeau9 2

Dark but good

This first book of a new series is very good dark but good. If you the winter wolf series you will most ly enjoy it. The main is a killer but with a moral compass. He is more in touch with himself the a lot of the grimdark MCs and is rather fun to read. Looking forward to the next1 1 comment Jason Rinehart11

Odd Syntax

This was a good story by a great writer. My only issue is his apparent addiction to commas. Please seek help.1 1 comment James Riley759 11

Very good

I pretty much inhaled this book over a night. It was just a fun read, albeit a bit dark in parts. Oh as Ari freaking rocks.

I can't wait for the next one.

Highly recommended. thomas shearer14

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