This story had potential however it was never fleshed out. Way too simplistic. Characters that were on the surface likable yet one dimensional. Instalove. Plots that should have been intense and drawn out yet were flatly told. It happened, he's sad, then it's over. Onto the next plot point. It happens, scared, injured, over. Final plot which should have been dramatic... Happens over and done. BORING. UNREALISTIC. Big bad guy... Bad cops... Yet in the end cops suddenly do their job. In an instant, with no emotion then over. SMH. Total waste of time. 2016-read m-m owned-but-deleted ...more1 Shirley (Secret Squirrel)1,017 3

I'm not sure how to rate this so I just went middle of the road. This was a very strange story, too much happened too quickly. Very violent. D.1,815 11

I expected this story to be sweet and cute but I'm so wrong! This involved one human being who acted an evil incarnate.mm-romance story-less-than-100pages Mickey16

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