Decent so far

The story line is not too bad. My biggest problem is that everything is in proper English, with very few contractions. Few people talk that way in the real world. That hasn't stopped me from reading the books. Waiting for the next one. DeWayne2

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Ehh.

This is either a poor translation or written by a bot. The dialogue has terrible flow. The story i has a staccato pace. This is choppy and lacking direction. Susan Toussaint724 6

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