Oh it’s bad. The mfc is portrayed as a child, and acts one.

I find it really insulting when authors write about something they obviously don’t know anything about. Olivia is awful and I couldn’t stand her, and Silvio is awful and I couldn’t stand him. She acts a two year old all the way through the book. Being threatened by an evil man, she has a temper tantrum and calls him a poo head!!! It’s not funny or cute! The romance is non existent as is the plot, and at times I wondered why I was still reading it. Silvio is really cold and calls her girl all the way through. No terms of endearment.

Silvio meets Olivia when she’s working in his restaurants kitchen. He mistakenly thinks she’s stealing from him, and takes her to punish her. For some bizarre reason he still thinks she was stealing from him at the end of the book! Silvio is supposed to be a top hitman for ? Who knows. When all the hit men are being killed Silvio is in danger.

I didn’t enjoy this book at at all. Apart from the stupid plot, there are huge plot mistakes. For example Olivia is on a break when Silvio drags her off for stealing. Yet she goes back to work a few days later and no one says anything. Then there Olivia.
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