Good but not great. Too much game theory for my taste so I just skimmed those parts. I'll read the second book when it comes out.2024 litrpg1 Johnny1,848 63

Book one

I was there when the original draft came out on Royalroad. I was there when it went on hiatus.
I kept it in my favorites because I enjoyed the story and was always looking to see if it was back.
So I was there when the new draft came out.
By then I had so much to read that I never got the chance to see how it was different from the first draft.
I'm going to say that this was an improvement from the first draft.
The MC while likable is almost always playing people. Doing and acting in ways that might give him the advantage. He is definitely a narcissist. He very rarely shows his true self, were he isn't trying to manipulate someone.

There were some mistakes that I will list on Goodreads, but for now I'm heading to Royalroad to keep reading this story.

7/10 Cmoore1,861

The book was a bit of a let down, not that the story wasn't fun and MC was a big part of that fun, but the MC, Harold Stone was also just so damn irritating, his hubris was just plain obnoxious. Luckily he didn't actually share these private thoughts out loud or his adventuring team would've given up on him and dumped him in the nearest alley. But unfortunately he was actually correct in everything thing he thought about himself, he was magnanimous, but the joke wore thin, very very thin and I actually ended up hating him for it...
However Christian J Gilliland was a firebrand and gave out a perfectly nuanced performance. Jim Phillips469 1 follower

That was nice

The jumping view from teen to adult was jarring but after that the story went surprisingly well. The stats were nice. Not getting bogged down in them was nicer.

Not really an epilogue but not terrible either. Zoltan Miskolci1 review

very cool. :)

I his way of thinking.
I don’t , but I understand the narcissist self comments. Everyone has high self opinion of themselves. Mark Ely136 3

Diifferent

Different. Need to think about it. Definitely going on to next book.
Interesting characters and their development. Weird world settings. Prince Washington6

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