The GOOD:
Straightforward writing that can say much in 50 pages. Good detailed sex scenes. d 31yo surgeon H's OTT obssessive-stalkery insta-love for h & his possessive-claimy “mine” with h. Loved his determination that she's “it” for him & wasn't waylaid by her resistances to their developing romance since he could tell that she was mutually attracted to him.

MEH or the BAD:
Didn't care for 19yo virgin receptionist h's overall standoffish-ness. She lacked the charm & down-to-earth likability of the h from Unmasking the Billionaire. This h just seemed too cold for my liking. She repeatedly kept pushing H away because she was scared to be so emotionally attached to a man her mom was who committed suicide within the last year because her BF cheated on her. It became annoying. Lacked the humor & emotional pull of Unmasking the Billionaire. Average romance/pacing/S chem/emo.

Sexual History:
virgin h shared some kisses with boys back in high school but didn't feel any real attachments to any of them. H was selective with his choice of lovers over the years after some ONS experiences in college left him dissatisfied overall. He was also a workaholic so he preferred taking care of his sexual pleasure himself than casual sex. It sounded he hadn't had any lovers in months. Possibly years. Until h.age-gap-may-dec boss-employee celibate-hero ...more15 s Inna1,570 306

3 stars. I d the story, but there were just way too many typos - often totally wrong words and grammar errors. This story needs some major proofreading.

Safe; virgin heroine, celibate hero, no om/ow drama, no cheating. This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.Show full review1-rating-3-stars 2-contemporary 2-novella ...more7 s *?Remnant Light ????*??? [On Hiatus]317 368

**3.6/5 stars**

I went into this not expecting much but I kind of enjoyed it, even considering how short it was.

Keven was a true OTT hero. It didn't seem he was going to be at first, but with each page, he grew more obsessed with Chloe. He was possessive, protective, besotted, jealous and I would also add overbearing. He knew from the moment he first saw her, that he wanted her, that she was it for him. It is hinted that he has been celibate for quite some time, being focused on his career.

“I’d risk my life to save her a thousand times over if only for the simple fact that I feel I’ll cease to exist in a world where she doesn’t exist.”-Kevin

As for Chloe, I had a little bit of an issue with her. As much as I admire a heroine who doesn't fall for the hero right away, and makes him work to win her over; I wished that her reasoning for refusing him and pushing him away had been different. I would've honestly been happy with the simple reason that ''it's going too fast and she barely knows him''...Instead, we are supposed to believe that she just places all men in the same basket because one single man cheated on her mother causing her to overdose. I can understand the fear, but I just thought that it was a tiny bit overdramatic.

“ that Def Leppard song, love bites, and I’m not ready to bleed.”-Chloe

Anywho! I kinda d the dynamic between Kevin and Chloe. I said, I admired that she didn't give in right away, and that prompted him to attempt the art of wooing (lmao), flowers, asking her on dates (or rather inviting himself), showing how much he wanted her, etc.

??HEA5 years later, they are married and have two kids
??Novella
??Dual POV
??Age gap H is 30 while h is 19
??OTT H stalking, obsessed, jealous, possessive, controlling
??Virgin h
??No cheating
??No OW/OM
??Push and pull H pulling hard, and h pushing

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