"Ripeness is just the beginning of rot"

"But care's not a substance. It's an action we do."

Bold! Unique! Funny! Nuanced! This novel-in-verse (who even writes those anymore??) was everything I wanted and more. Composed entirely of sonnets, it's the story of a year in the lives of a group of queer trans women in NYC, complete with plenty of dyke drama: breakups, baby planning, unrequited love, u-hauling, arguments about feminist theory, parties, hook-ups, and one disastrous "community accountability process."

Don't think because this book is told in rhyming poetry that it doesn't engage in serious issues, because it does: consent, racism in queer/trans spaces, sex work, and financial insecurity. But, The Call-Out is also very funny, in a way only a knowing insider to this community could be. I laughed out loud! Cat Fitzpatrick blends comedy and tragedy beautifully. The book is an homage to Pushkin's 19th century
Russian classic Eugene Onegin, which I haven't read, but I kind of want to now?

I have never read a book quite this. Perhaps the closest is The Golden Gate by Vikram Seth, which is another (the only other?) adult novel-in-verse about a group of queer friends, published in 1986. I see not surprisingly Fitzpatrick mentions it in her acknowledgements. Let's hope we don't have to wait another 30+ years for another!american contemporary fiction ...more21 s2 comments laurel [the suspected bibliophile]1,610 592

One thing about drawing, why it's different than a photo,
is that style has history, so when you draw
you're in touch with everyone who's drawn before

Six queer mostly trans women living in New York are followed in a series of in-verse blog posts by an anonymous narrator. Their lives and how they intersect, and their ups and downs and intimate details, are relayed in breathless voice, intersecting on queerness, transness, consent, racism, whiteness, feminism, and the intersection of identities. It's a book filled with trans joy and the frustrations of community.

I really, really enjoyed this book, and I don't often poetry. But this was different.

I got deeply invested in the lives of Kate, Aanvi, Bette, Day, Gaia/Proserpina and Keiko, and . Woof. I don't want to give too much away because it's a very intimate look. And that epilogue...oh my.

One other quote that stuck out to me, among a myriad:

A connection has to go two ways,
You only d me when I gave you praise.
What you want from me is your own reflection2024-read contemporary lgbtq ...more8 s August Thompson69 12

"The Call-Out" is a comedy of manners, in verse, based loosely on the Russian novel "Eugene Onegin," about trans drama in NYC. It completely delivers on this setup. Honestly if that alone doesn't make you want to read it what the hell would? But I'll spend a little more time on this review.

A novel in verse in 2022 is ambitious. Cat Fitzpatrick is more than competent enough as both a poet and a storyteller to make it work. This novel is as funny as you would expect, but it also surprised me with how poignant it was. Some well-placed softer moments, along with insights about transness or youth or life, give us a chance to really care about the characters and hope they make it through the mess of drama they find themselves in. And that mess of drama is sad and funny and frustrating and accurate.

Communities are hard.

ARC provided by Seven Stories Press through the bookstore where I work. lgbt-general trans7 s Bryan CebulskiAuthor 4 books45

"but care's not a substance. It's an action we do."5 s iris160

the fact that someone can write an entire novel in rhyme is insaaaane to me!! it was so well written and gripping…

the actual story has so many wonderful layers and all these expertly crafted contradictions. the characters feel real and alive and their struggles raw and frank!! I loved it lgbtqia literary-fiction lyrical ...more3 s Sarah CavarAuthor 13 books219

This just felt very….forced? I think the rhyming pushed it over the edge for me. 2023 poetry3 s Cooper Lee BombardierAuthor 18 books71

Cat Fitzpatrick's cutting, tender, funny novel in rhyming verse about trans intercommunity relations deftly reveals the ways we are bound to each other despite how we fail, cause harm, or consider ourselves above the drama. Thought-provoking and hilarious even when it caused a wince of painful recognition, The Call-Out is a love letter to the messiness of community and how we still need it, despite its mess. I appreciate most of all the formal and creative risks taken in the capable hands of this wonderful poet.2022_reading-challenge2 s Stitching Ghost794 149

I admire the work that went into the structure of this novel it's a great style experiement, but it really wasn't my vibe. 2 s trinity26

I d that this was a story about the complicated intricacies and shortcomings of call out culture within a trans community, attempting to make sense out of the body politic, attempts at reformation and reintegration rather than ostracization, dialogue surrounding consent and how consent can shift into acquiescence and hesitation and how difficult it can be to then speak up, (to give consent is a continuous act etc).

I also d how this book contains all the trans archetypes: the nerd, the slut, the cynic, and the socialite.

It positions itself within trans fiction cannon by referencing Nevada by Imogen Binnie and giving praise to the works that were made possible in its wake by having the characters attend a book reading (which I'm pretty sure Fitzpatrick was involved in Topside Press in some way so this was definitely based on real life experiences, but also so is everything else in this book i guess) and so it places itself as being within that scene, that culture, that legacy.

It's refreshing to have a work of trans poetry not be explicitly about the linkage between childhood trauma and queerness/transness. (Sure it's still about trans trauma but at least of a different variety?)

While I appreciate how novel it is to write an entire work of trans poetics in Iambic Tetrameter, I can't help but wonder why THIS story?

Substantively, I almost wish that more attention would have been given to fallout from and the repercussions of the titular call out. There was a lot of attention given to the exposition, but less prudence paid to what actually comes FROM a call out. The confusion, the acknowledgment of harm, the self reformation (or lack-thereof). The ways in which call outs are instruments of division, and while useful in certain contexts, what is the role of the 'cancelation' from a trans community when the scene is already composed of those outcast, rejected, canceled from cisheteronormative society?

I am not sure the intent of having the story told from the perspective of a jaded trans cynic, only to have them "called out" in the epilogue, which was a fictitious comment left in the comment section of a fictitious blog post.

I guess that's my biggest complaint: what was the intent of having this book about the wicked world of call-outs and cancelations in trans community written through the lens of BOTH rhyming verse AND a meta blogpost format? I mean in a sense I guess that's the most trans thing about this book, it's about subtweeting your messy trans besties drama on some esoteric substack in iambic tetrameter because you're overeducated and neurotic to your 5 , each of whom is being subtweeted in the drama.

Cat if you're reading this (lol) I'm a doll living in DC and the scene here is wild and messy and beautiful just in your book let's get coffee :~)trans-queer-poetry1 cardulelia carduelis543 30

A novel in verse is a hard sell for most (including me). But this managed to keep me hooked and even enjoying the format. It's difficult to read at times, and all the protagonists are so achingly flawed, but it's also light and funny. What a feat Fitzpatrick has pulled off.

The book follows seven women, either trans or trans-adjacent, living in the Big Apple and figuring out their lives. It takes place as blog posts (something that only feels justified in the epilogue) written in rhyming scheme which mirrors that of Eugene Onegin, from here: Seattle Opera educational resources:


Pushkin’s verse poem Eugene Onegin consist of
some 100 14-line sonnet- stanzas written in iambic tetrameter, with a rhyme scheme of ABAB; CCDD; EFFEGG.


The verse is very easy to read and stops feeling a gimmick quickly. It's most effective during transitions between one couple and another the narrative being swept along in the movement of the stanza.
The content itself was deeper than I expected from the rom-com cover and marketing. It's explores how understanding gender/race/relational identity is different to living it and applying it. It explores cancel culture. It explores stewardship and mentoring. It explores consent and morality and punishment.
I don't think it has many answers but it certainly raises a lot of questions and it would be incredible material for a book club - there are so many ideas to unpack here. What I really enjoy is how different the characters are and how none of them have figured out the right answer yet.
There are many points of view in this that I didn't share, but honestly that made it all the more interesting to read.

I kind of wish it was a full-blown novel because I really want to hear the characters expand on their views and tell me more about their internal journey.
Recommended.



On an unrelated note, this was my sixth bookbox from SF's Green Apple Books Apple-a-month bookclub. Check them out here.


litbox1 Rob Forteath269 3

The first bit of this book seems aimed at an extremely specific audience: promiscuous, disaffected, young people in NYC. everyone else can read the words but won't get much of the context and references.

Fortunately, that doesn't last long. Soon you are following several very distinctive and interesting characters through their interactions and relationships, hook-ups, misinterpretations, regrets, so much to digest!

The tribulations are a lot what every group of young people might go through, except that the author continually shows us how much harder it is to navigate your life when you are simultaneously having to deal with your most basic concept of your identity shifting around under you. And when most of society either hates you or just finds you inconvenient.

The one central controversy is very good indeed, and draws us in, making us feel just how small the community is, and thus how important it is that they navigate this without breaking into estranged cliques. When the showdown that interests everyone can be held in a single apartment living room, it is plain that nobody there has the luxury of choosing peer groups.

The story is so interesting that you soon forget it's being told in rhyme, except when an occasional unusual word or odd sentence order draws your attention to it.1 River Crabbe53 1 follower

I had the absolute pleasure of hearing Cat read from this! She's so funny and clever.

The book is great, and ridiculous. It deals with a pretty serious and frustrating classic tale that many of us have been involved with, with respect for the complexity of dynamics as well as a lightness and humour. The characters feel recognisable, the dynamics infuriatingly familiar, and there's a shit load of trans in jokes that feel really....fucking pleasurable to read about.

I'm not sold on the sonnet form. I would have loved more of the characters and stories without it being squeezed into a particular shape, but also the narrator seems self aware of how ridiculous this is and it's part of why the book is so funny. Tbh one of my fave parts is the self awareness of the narrator.1 Dani Pergola99 35

Had I known that sexual assault was a central theme of this book, I probably would not have read it; nevertheless, I’m glad I did. This novel in verse follows a group of trans women in New York, charting their complicated relationships and punctuated by an online callout post about a sexual assault. This book was about the relationships between trans women specifically, but other queer readers will probably identify, as I did, with the discourse and infighting that happens among the characters. The Callout is a totally unique book in that it actually captures these conflicts in a realistic and nuanced way. Recommend to any queer reader (and obviously tw for sexual assault). 1 endrju242 61

Oh, I did not expect this. So smart. It's not peppered with theory but drenched in it, but the bodily and the interpersonal are not lost. To the contrary, what transpires between these trans women acquires even more heft given the theoretical concerns. And to adopt such a form in this context - brilliant. 2 s Mark Schiffer437 21

Tore through this queer riff on Eugene Onegin. So much fun.queer verse1 Akiva ?838 53

Generally, yeah! The rhyme scheme seemed purposely kind of odd and it often doesn't scan, but you know what, it's still a fun idea and an interesting accomplishment. I should quote some of my favorite bits---the stanza about Philly Trans Health makes the cut of course---when I have it on hand.3-fmt-f-novel 3-fmt-poetry f-feelings-are-ineffable ...more1 Zoe164 28

I was thrilled to learn, some months ago, of The Call-Out's publication. I had the privilege of reading it first in serialized form, on an email list, as it was being drafted over the course of 2018 to 2019. While it was fascinating to interact with the writer and watch the artistic process and narrative unfold, it is only more satisfying to re-read it and experience it as a complete work of literature.

It's hard to know which aspect of The Call-Out to gush about first. Of course, there is my general unceasing glee at trans lit being a thing at all. Almost a decade since first reading Plett's A Safe Girl to Love, I still haven't quite gotten used to the fact that we get to have stories written by us, about us, and for us, with an inimitable specificity. The conference, with its readings and picnics! The fucked up accountability processes! The stoned gamers, flirtatious weirdos, and special-interest intellectuals! These are trans women those I know and love and can't stand.

Not only is it authentic, it's also genuinely very good. The Call-Out has all the elements of a great tragedy. There's an ensemble of vivid characters, each with their fatal flaw, and an arc toward an inevitable fall (mirrored by the arc of the year). The "omniscient" narrator delivers us the dramatic irony via the conceit of an internet call-out post, within which the central call-out (or call-outs) of the narrative are nested. (Hypocrisy and cynicism in the pursuit of justice within an unjust world seem to me to be major themes.)

Then there's the poetic form, which one might expect to feel dated. My previous experiences reading narratives in verse have mostly been in English textbooks, and were mostly written by Poe or some such 19th century cis straight white man of the canon; perfectly enjoyable pieces, but far removed from contemporary life, and in their narrowness of identity, perfectly inadequate to representing the full breadth of human experiences. So it is additionally gratifying that Cat Fitzpatrick lays claim to this format for telling her story about messy trans women, and our messy apartments, messy non-monogamous relationships, messy internet feuds, messy theory, messy praxis – as if to say that we, in all our messiness, are also worthy subjects of "high art."

But apart from its perhaps incidental political achievements, the book is, simply put, delightful to read. At many points, even on the second read, I laughed out loud, or felt compelled to turn to my partner to read them a particularly clever passage aloud. (Me: "the contents of the local thrift store / have been requisitioned, then dumped on the floor." Them: "I think I know that apartment.)

I think this is what impresses me most about this ambitious novel: that it all actually works. The subjects, the rhyme scheme, the satire, the tragedy, the humor – all have been ingeniously woven together, so that my strongest reaction is one of awe. I eagerly await whatever Cat Fitzpatrick does next, but in the meantime, I will be pestering all of my friends and loved ones to read The Call-Out.by-trans-for-trans favorites funny-shit ...more1 Gino30 1 follower

This was so short and fun that I suggest it.

I thought the rhyming was quite interesting because in some stanzas, Fitzpatrick was cramming complex trans theory and classic references into a simple rhyme pattern. In other stanzas, heightened emotion was reduced to a singular rhyming word. I think this restriction kept this read fun and fresh; are you gonna get life or death drama in a couplet or a silly, watered-down rhyme scheme? Despite being fun, this restriction that called for severely heightened or “unheightened” retellings felt a metaphor for the trans experience; you are in this box and you must tell your story in this pre-given frame and people may or may not / understand it.

I loved seeing my fellow non-cis NYC-er’s being centered, especially from an AMAB perspective. I loved the content in this because it showed that we are not a monolith. We’re a tiny community but everyone disagrees even if everyone knows each other. There’s dichotomy in our lives. And just when you think you’ve received the opinionated and only message of the narrator, you get an opposing view.

Definitely suggest! Taking 1 star away for how often I was confused by who was speaking (maybe user error) and 1 star away for general pizzazz. I didn’t put this book down feeling “wow”. But please read it regardless, it’ll take no time and is a nice break of pace.1 Cleo Mace15 1 follower

Ah! So much fun! Agonising sometimes! Every character is right and wrong constantly. Leaves you with no answers. Cool book.1 Anna Hawes477

I'm always afraid that 'a novel in verse' will feel gimmicky but it certainly didn't in this case. While there were a few lines that felt shoehorned into the form, most of it flowed really well and there were quite a few lines that were utterly delightful because of their rhyme and rhythm. I will say that a physical copy probably would have been better than an electronic copy for formatting purposes. There were a few times when I wasn't exactly sure which character was speaking but I think proper formatting from a physical copy would have helped. All in all, it was impressive how much complex dialogue the author was able to capture in verse.

It was special to have the entire cast of characters be trans women. Instead of a cast with a single trans character whose entire personality is just being trans, the women in this group got to show off how wide the range of personalities and views can be even in a relatively insular community. I'm normally not a big fan of drama, especially from the collapse of relationships, but the women were all fully realized in their flaws and strengths so I found it compelling rather than annoying.

I really loved the ending, with the introduction of another voice. I loved the take-away that "yes we are a mess and we may not always make the wisest choices but we are here and we are living and we are loving" Phoebe S.194 6

""Um. I have a Nintendo Switch.
I just got Smash Bros." -- "Oh my god, you bitch
invite me over. I will totally whip you
If I play as Samus."

Just an amazing delight. While covering a lot of how it is to exist as a trans woman socially and intracommunal dynamics, its fictionalized enough to be enjoyable. While not taking itself too terribly seriously, it still engages with a lot of different ideas, and how people use certain scripts to justify actions, within a short number of pages. Funny, tightly written, and Cat herself is an absolute joy to have talk.

Even with books Detransition, Baby, there's a lot of tendency to still show trans suffering, albeit in a more complex way than cis people show it. While about drama, call-outs, and dissatisfaction, I weirdly have to say this still felt a breath of fresh air, maybe due to its format or use of characters that are a mix of archetype and reality.

The only reason this was four stars was because it still felt exhausting to read about this constant discourse a bit, though the structure and playfulness of the rhyme certainly mitigates that. Also, I'm waaay too generous with 5-star . Ed Erwin1,006 118

The people in this novel-in-verse live lives very different from mine. That's fine. But it was hard for me to relate to. I'm not part of the young and very-online culture that they are in. The characters frequently refer to academic theory (Judith Butler, Andrea Dworkin, etc.) which I have little interest in. I didn't even know what the title "call-out" meant.

I'm no great fan of poetry either. And yet, I enjoyed much of this. The words flow easily and after I while I was able to read it fluidly, almost as prose. (And after finishing, the prose I read seemed sorely lacking rhymes and rhythm!)

Still, my favorite novel-in-verse (of the mere handful I've read) remains Love, Dishonor, Marry, Die, Cherish, Perish. I don't need to know about "Theory" to understand that one.poetry quiltbag Simone Laszuk355 5

I was hesitant about a novel in verse, especially rhyming verse. But it blew my mind-- Fitzpatrick told a real, raw, funny, and heartbreaking story, with multiple flushed out characters (that I actually feel I got to know) over an entire year in rhyme. I did not expect it to be so effective and engaging. Of course, there were limitations from the verse format and there was a lot I wanted more of and was left wondering about. But honestly on of the best reasons to not give five stars is because I was left wanting more.

I also LOVED the inclusion of the top voted comment in the same rhyming scheme. That was not only a fun call back to the format of online posting but was well done. 2023 Sirah1,686 11

A story of drama within the trans community of New York. This novel in verse follows six women, including the narrator, as they experience a year. There are breakups and hookups, romances and catcalls. It reflects on both the joys and difficulties of living in the world as a trans person, specifically a trans woman. We don't actually get to the call-out until near the end of the book, which makes me think that this story isn't so much about assault or accountability as it is about a feeling of loss for all the choices we never make. The book is insightful at times, cringe at others. I'm not really sure how to rate it, but at least the content warnings made me laugh. Dani RingroseAuthor 2 books4

I am in awe at the love and tenacity and skill that would have gone into writing such a novel. I remember how frustrating it was to wrangle ONE sonnet into shape at uni. I marvelled the whole way through the novel, and fortunately there was a cracker storyline and characters to match it. I lost count at how much I underlined in this too! A wonderful read, with some pieces worthy of standalone poems, especially the ones that start each "chapter".

"There's something entrancing / about a freeze-frame. It seems to suggest / that it's possible to preserve our jubilation / candied flowers, through crystallisation." 2023 award-winner debut-novel ...more Jare C16 4

I finished this a few days ago, and it’s been one of those books that has sat in my brain ever since.

I’m a trans woman. A recently hatched egg. And while I don’t live in NYC now, I did, and have spent a lot of time there in general. A lot of time thinking about the idea of what it means to be “queer in New York”.

Cat Fitzpatrick does a phenomenal job of pulling on her own experiences, while simultaneously presenting issues within the trans community without pretending to know the answers to them. The resulting story is one that feels very real and true, without giving up its charm. This is one of my favorite novels I’ve read in quite a while.

It’s a quick read, but not an easy one. If you’ve enjoyed this at all, I highly recommend you listen to Fitzpatrick’s appearance on the Gender Reveal podcast. That’s how I found the book, and I’m so glad I did. favorites1 Stephanie Dargusch Borders645 23

I read this one in chunks. Novels in verse are not my thing and I knew my brain would turn to mush if I attempted to plow through this one a typical novel. I read 1-2 chapters a sitting and found this one to be such a gem.

While I don’t typically love reading in verse, I can recognize that it was very well done here. The cohesion and flow of the narrative, the fluidity of the dialogue, we’re all very impressive to me. I won’t say it’s converted me but I did thoroughly enjoy this one and definitely recommend readers give it a try. Roz434 31

A lot of fun, The Call Out follows a bunch of trans women living in Brooklyn, sleeping around and causing drama. It’s messy, it’s funny, and in Fitzpatrick’s capable hands, it’s well told and well told in rhyme. I d it a lot. It’s a trans Onigen; maybe someday we’ll get a trans Byronic Don Juan. trans-lit Eadie McCarthy42

Get your dictionary out, she's got big words and knows how to use them.

Loved this book. Great to read outloud as asides from being written really well its also entirely in verse!!
It's about the drama between a group of mostly trans girls living in New York. It's very real on the intricacies of community and communication. Emma41 2

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