Another great entry

Alrighty so I am still loving the series. For a second entry published book if I’m not mistaken then this is far out really good. Great writing, world building, characters and plot development so far.

Biggest improvement over the last book is the third person jumbling in the last one. This reads now extremely well.
Admittedly there’s some rough spots but honestly not that bad and could be picked up by an editor or some alpha/beta readers etc.
Again most other everything is progressing really well and I don’t have much to say. There are of course some rough areas but I expect them to iron out with some more experience writing.

One teeny tiny thing I did pick up on is a bit of a delicate subject in the genre and with Amazon. Mainly regarding a couple characters (candy and Xena/xana) their race, descriptions and interactions with the MC. As far as I know, it’s not commonly done and could cause issues and possibly get the book taken down off the store. I don’t mind too much (I kinda skipped over those bits) but i wouldn’t recommend going too m Christopher Belan14

Good combat and interesting universe

I would read this series even without the sex. I the magic and fighting, but I miss the sports found in other academy series. I'm looking forward to the next book. I think there should be a bit more romance and conversations between the harem members, but I still what the author has done so far. I just skip the extra raunchy parts as they don't really impact the story. Jon20

so awesome

The first book was damn good but it just keeps getting better and better, from gods to demons , friends and lovers, and so many types of supernatural, so good!! Even though you Alan are a new author you write a story beyond your years, thank you kindly sir…. If I could make one recommendation please… WE NEED MORE BOOKS AS FAST AS POSSIBLE!!!!!!! Man I hope this series is 20-30-100 books lol I love it keep ‘em coming plz Jeremiah goyden10

It can't end that I need more!!

I'm honestly really enjoying the series so far, but I'm noticing a lot of typos and places where paragraphs are just separated. Not sure if the editing team just needs to be better or if there is something else. Otherwise I can't wait for the next book!1 comment Mustafa Ali22

solid sequel with great humor and more world building

This sequel was great, with even more of the same type of humor the last book had and even more world building. Can’t wait to see what else our protagonist gets up to in the sequels. Charles Cook14

delicious

Lots of action, gorgeous women and a good plot. I just wish it was illustrated. I am anticipating the next book will be just as good. Kent Herring499 2

Great Read

It was so good I lost the ability to move air several times and had to take a few breaks. I can't wait for the next one to come out. Love this series. Jason62

Great Continuation

This is such a good series. Well written. Fun characters. Lots of adventure and spicy scenes. Everything you could want if you are a fan of this genre. Tracy S McCoy1,187 9

An awesome series!!!

A truly awesome adult fantasy adventure filled with wonderful characters!!! You'll laugh and cheer as the MC grows in power as well as his family expands!!! Chris Jackson71 1 follower

love where the series is going can't wait for book 3 Michael Morrison16

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